Friday, 3 February 2012

The Unknown, (what do you think will you tell me or will it be unknown?)

The Unknown

By Annie



Chapter 1

The Unknown Mystery

I can’t believe it happened to me. Me, Katie and Chloe. But how could it happen. We were SO careful as well. We were coming home from school just the three of us than all of a sudden we got the same text message at the same time. This was the message:



‘Meet me at Hill Road Park tonight at 7.45pm. If you don’t you’ll be sorry, very sorry in deed.’



We got freaked out not only because it was an unknown number and we didn’t know who it was from. We were freaked out because we didn’t know what to do. We were near Hill Road Park and it was 7.40 in the evening. We were cold, scared and worried what on Earth should we do now? As we were approaching 7.43 I got a text just me. But this one said:



‘I know who you are but you might not know me. I’m near an old oak tree. So I’m very near beware!’



Now we were freaking out. I tried to call my mum. Just as I was about to ring her I got a phone call the number was 08935217457. I didn’t know the number so hung up. Then I got a third message which was:



‘You didn’t answer the phone. Now you’ll pay, all of you 1 minute left. If you call or contact anyone else like family, other friends or call 999. I’ll take you away from everyone you care about.’



Now we were really freaking out. All the street lights turned out in a row all 23 of them. Then I got grabbed. And my mouth was covered with really sticky duck-tape. Then a sack went over me. From my feet I could feel being carried then chucked in a van. It felt like it was a small van like a mail van. At least 3 hours later I was trapped, trapped in a big box with a toilet and sink, a bed and a window. Was I in a prison? I couldn’t see Katie or Chloe. I heard a threatening shriek. But ran to a set of bars which I think was a door, to see what was going on. A girl with cuts and bruises got forced to go into a cell. Like mine! I panicked and reached for my phone. They took it, lousy girl-nappers. I said that because there is not a boy in the whole building (that I know of). Suddenly an annoying but loud alarm went off. People with masks on came down telling everyone in every cell to line out of their cell in single file. So I did what I was told. The girls standing next to me were look nerves. I asked a girl who was crying, “What’s going on? Where are we? How old are you?”

She replied, “We’re not supposed to be talking!” she told strictly but quietly. “But my name is Evie Smith and stop talking or we’ll BOTH get in massive trouble.”

So I stopped talking. Than three people came down looking at each and every one of us carefully. Then I heard,

“These two!!!” then all the girls went back in their cells but me and Evie got dragged.

“What’s going on????” I asked Evie in complete terror.


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