My Life
It’s hard to be me. My little brother’s always in hospital. After mum and dad died in a car crash, my brother’s been very sick. My brother Max and I live at the hospital. We were all in the car going to the zoo for Max’s 5th birthday, but the car rolled I only broke my right arm. As you know my mum and dad were killed. Max got brain damage and he can’t remember mum or dad. Only me and our Nan. Max and I were rushed to hospital Max was confused he was asking for me and our nan. I asked him, ‘Are you ok?’ Ever since the accident Max hadn’t talked about mum or dad only the doctors and nurses, me and nan. When we got to the hospital we had to go to A + E. After that Max and I went to two different rooms. I forced them to make us go to the same room and have beds next to each other. Now my arm had a cast on it, and I went to the nearest town to buy a Mr Cuddles teddy bear for Max and he loved it. He still has it. My arm is a lot better but I need to be careful now. I’m better but not Max. It’s been a year since the accident. It’s Max’s 6th birthday and I’ve asked Nurse Jane can I take Max to a theme park. I’m aloud but as long as Nurse Rosy comes just in case of an emergency. Nurse Rosy was my nurse when I fell off my bike when I was 5. I’m 12 now. I hope Max will be alright today. Max loves Thomas The Tank Engine and that’s what theme park we went to. We went on anything he wanted to go on and we ate pizza, drank coke and had the time of our lives, but when me and Max went on the Harold Helicopter Ride my arm got trapped in the bar it wasn’t Max who went to hospital in an ambulance it was me. Nurse Rosy, Max and I went in the ambulance. Max sat on me crying his eyes out. That was me when mum and dad were killed. I’m scared now is the accident re-happening but not as bad. How is this possible? I closed my eyes everything was a blur to me. I had a dream not just any dream it was a replay of our accident. I was a ghost. Everyone was happy and singing. Nan wasn’t in the car, but how did she get here after the crash? Wait a minute! There’s a dead body in front of the car. But how did we do a flip? I was too late to stop the crash. I go investigate. What?! Two children; one child scrunched up in a ball and the other one like a star fish on the ground. Both like a white ghost. They had blood and knifes on their backs. How did they get killed? I run over to the accident. I see mum and dad crawling to each other. Max and I are in the ambulance going to the hospital. The police are here, nan is here too. A police man and women go to my parents and the two police men do something to my parents and my mum and dad stop moving but how. I wake up in the hospital everything a blur again. All my school friends are here (trust me it’s more than 50), my nana, my doctors and nurses are here too. But where was Max?
“Where’s Max?” I ask, “I need Max. His ok isn’t he?” Everyone looked to the floor as if they were ashamed.
“Well,” started nan. “His at A + E.”
“Why?” I asked sitting up in my bed, alarmed.
“He got too scared that you got hurt and stopped breathing,” replied nan.
“What!” I said now starting to cry.
“You know his the closes family member I’ve got left. You’re always on holidays or at the retirement home. Where is he?”
“His at a special Junior Ward, dear. I’m so sorry for making you feel that way, can you forgive me?” Asked my nan. I was too busy telling people to move and go to Max that I didn’t hear my nan. I found him. Nurse rosy was there Max was still asleep. I sat next to him and his Mr. Cuddles teddy bear. I was crying saying,
“Max can you hear me it’s your sister, Charlotte, Max move you hand if you can hear me,” One of my tears landed on his cheek. As if by magic Max started coughing, well his heart started beating again let’s say that. Max got up and hugged me. And guess what he gave me a picture of my mum, my dad, Max and me. It was us together a week before the crash. We all went to France for the day and all the time we were there it was sunny but it was raining, but none of us cared we just smiled and starting dancing. We had the time of our lives but then a week later, my heart had been broken because of the accident and murder, my arm was broken as well but literally.
“Max, go and play in the play area with nan,”
“Ok, Charlotte is everything ok?” asked Max happier now.
“Yeah, yeah have fun I’ll be there in a minute,” I said to Max. Max ran to nan and told her what I’ve said. When nan, Nurse Rosy and Max left I went to talk to Nurse Rosy,
“Nurse Rosy can I talk,”
“Charlotte is everything ok?” asked Nurse Rosy.
“Not quite,” I said,
“What do you want to talk about?” asked Nurse Rosy kindly.
“Well you know when I was a sleep,” I started.
“Yes,” Nurse rosy said not to sure.
I continued, “You know when I closed my eyes and everything was a blur to me. I had a dream and I think it was a replay of our accident. Everyone was happy and singing when we were driving. Nan wasn’t in the car, but I still don’t know how she got here after the crash. I saw a dead body in front of the car. But I don’t know how our car flip? It was too late to stop the crash. I went to investigate. There were two children; one child scrunched up in a ball and the other one like a star fish on the ground. Both very pale. They had blood and knifes on their backs. I’m still wondering how they got killed? I ran over to the accident. I saw mum and dad crawling to each other. Max and I are in the ambulance going to the hospital. The police where there, nan was there too. A police man and women went to my parents and the two police men did something to my parents and my mum and dad but I don’t know how they stopped moving.”
“Have you told your brother?” asked Nurse Rosy.
“No,” I replied
“Don’t say it ever again especially to your brother.” Said Nurse Rosy sternly.
“Ok,” I said scared.
“Charlotte!!!!!” cried nan. Nurse Rosy and I ran to the play room. There was Max laid down on the floor shaking and saying,
“NEED CHARLOTTE AND NAN! NEED CHARLOTTE AND NAN! HAVE NO MUMMY OR DADDY! ONLY HAVE CHARLOTTE AND NAN!” I run to Max and tell everyone go away. All the doctors and nurses came. I didn’t leave Max I sat on the bed with him. He had to go to A + E. I had to leave him. Nan and Nurse Rosy tried to calm me down. I have to wait for an hour until I can see Max again. An hour pasted. Out comes Max he looks like he saw something bad. He runs and hugs me.
“What’s wrong, Max?” I ask.
“Me see horror, bad, Max did.” Uh-Oh when Max says ‘me see horror, bad, Max did’ that means he has seen something like a new Steven-King book or film.
“Do you want to tell big sis what happened?” I asked once again. Max nodded, and he says,
“I have dream of replay of our accident. I’m a ghost. Everyone happy and singing. Nana wasn’t in car, BOOM! Car crash. There is a sleeping body in front of car. But we do flip anyway. Two children; one child like a ball and the other one like star fish on ground. Both white ghost. They had red paint and pointy sticks on backs. I run over to the boom, bang. I see people. Max and Charlotte are in a car going to special us home. There were people in blue, nana is here too. A blue boy and girl go to people and the two do something to people and people stop moving.” Should I tell him what’s happening or not.
“NURSE ROSY!!!!!!” I cried.
“Yes Char….” Said Nurse Rosy until I butted in.
“He had the dream as well but he thought our parents and police are just people and he said the same thing but in his own words.”
“Yeah tell him,” said nan.
“Maxy, Can I tell you something?” I asked.
“Yeah, Yeah” Max said jumping up and down like he was on a mini trampoline.
“The two people crawling to each other is our mummy and daddy,” I said. Max stopped jumping and started crying and said,
“I remember! I remember!”
Hallelujah! Hallelujah! He remembers! He remembers! But that still doesn’t help him with his illness.
“Nurse Rosy can I take Max and nan to the forest?” I asked,
“I guess so,” said Nurse Rosy. I took everyone to the forest; me, nan and Max. We had a picnic. After the picnic Max and I played explorer, explorer. (It’s when you need to find something you don’t often find.)
THE END (for now).
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